What do you think of these translations?

I came across A. S. Kline's translations today courtesy of David Meadows and Explorator, because he (Kline) has just posted his translation of Ovid's Fasti. After a glance at the Fasti, I looked around to see what else he has translated, and found his Sappho. Here's the one Catullus liked, rendered into down-to-earth English. Is it too down-to-earth for you? I'm trying to work out what I feel.

‘He’s equal with the Gods, that man’

He’s equal with the Gods, that man
Who sits across from you,
Face to face, close enough, to sip
Your voice’s sweetness,

And what excites my mind,
Your laughter, glittering. So,
When I see you, for a moment,
My voice goes,

My tongue freezes. Fire,
Delicate fire, in the flesh.
Blind, stunned, the sound
Of thunder, in my ears.

Shivering with sweat, cold
Tremors over the skin,
I turn the colour of dead grass,
And I’m an inch from dying.

These lines are my favourite Sappho fragment at the moment. I don't think they can fail, almost however they are translated; and this minimalist version is fine by me:


‘The Moon is down’

The Moon is down,
The Pleiades. Midnight,
The hours flow on,
I lie, alone.

But I have a soft spot for A.E. Housman's version, which you may well know:

The rainy Pleiads wester

The rainy Pleiads wester,
Orion plunges prone,
The stroke of midnight ceases
And I lie down alone.

The rainy Pleiads wester,
And seek beyond the sea
The head that I shall dream of
That will not dream of me.

Or is less more?

Agamemnon seems cheap by comparison

Bulgarian archaeologist Georgi Kitov shows a 2,400-year-old golden mask Friday in Shipka, Bulgaria. The solid gold mask was discovered late Thursday in the tomb of an ancient Thracian king.

“It is sensational and has no comparison in the world,” he said. “The Mask of Agamemnon was made of gold foil and weighs only 60 grams [2.1 ounces], while this mask weighs 690 grams [24 ounces] and is of solid gold.”

I know the so-called 'Mask of Agamemnon' is probably nothing to do with the Agamemnon we know and love, but the idea that while Mycenae was flourishing and famous, somewhere else in far-off Thrace or Bulgaria was even more flourishing and now completely forgotten is ironic, and underlines the importance of the literature as opposed to the material wealth of the ancient Greeks. I think that in our natural welcome for all the current interest in the ancient world, we need to bear that in mind.

So why are A level pass rates rising all the time?

A certain Martin Green, who says he has retired after 18 years as head of a sixth form, claims in today's Independent that there's a conspiracy between government, teachers and exam boards to push results up year after year. He says their motivation is clear.

I'd like to put in my penn'oth, because I've seen my own pupils' results getting better and better in my teaching career. I don't think the intelligence of my pupils varied all that much over the years, and although my teaching may have improved a wee bit through experience, that can't be the whole answer. I believe that the biggest change has been in attitude towards exams.

When I was researching the history of the school I taught at, a former pupil told me this:

The teaching is those days (about 1940) was relaxed and School Cert. came on one without fuss. Exams were taken in one's stride.

Another former pupil agreed:

Of course you were told that you should get good results, but nothing like the pressure put on the young today. … As for external exams, they said 'Your exam is next Tuesday' and you go and do it. There was none of the present pushing or great swotting or urgency about it.

From a slightly later period, I can bear witness to this attitude. O levels came in in 1952,I think, and I would have been in the first batch of examinees, if it had not been for the 'age bar', the regulation that no one under 16 years old was allowed to sit the new exam. My school's response was to promote me into the Lower Sixth anyway, and put me in for 3 A levels at the end of that Lower Sixth year, along with English language, French and Maths – and History of Science of all things. My results were as might be expected – scraped through in English, French and Maths, failed History of Science entirely, and got an O level pass in the three A level subjects.

I was disappointed, naturally, because I wasn't used to failing exams, but no one was too put out. I just did another year in the Sixth Form and took the A levels again, and passed this time. At the same time, we had a very full life of sport (only as far as the 2nd XV), music, school plays, Art lessons (that has just come back to me) with afternoons out to study local buildings of merit, and clubs run by pupils. We were pupils in those days; none of this wishing one's life away by becoming 'students' before we got to university.

But I allow myself to be distracted from my point. In Sixth Form lessons we were not taught for A level. We were taught Latin, Greek and Ancient History for their own sakes. I cannot remember what our set texts were, because they were just four among the many that we read. I still possess, somewhere, the four-page printed sheet listing all the major Classical authors, with space for us to fill in the works of each as we read them. By the time I left school I had written in works by many of the names, including Theocritus, and we had read even pseudo-Euripides, the Rhesus.

When, after a gap of about 20 years, I went back to school as a teacher, I expected to teach in a similar way, only to find that the pressure was on to teach exclusively towards the next exam. 'Is it on the syllabus?' was the pupils' cry. If the pressure did not come from the pupils, it came from the parents. If not from them, it came from the Head in her little private discussions with each head of department after the department's exam results. During my 20 plus years of teaching, that pressure grew and became (to me) irresistable. The interesting digressions that were possible during my first ten years became impossible by the end. Retirement for me came just at the right time.

And the point of these reminiscences? As teaching concentrates ever more narrowly on getting grades, the grades pupils get will go up. They are almost bound to. But the improvements in exam results come at a cost. No dalliance with Theocritus or the Rhesus. No delight in producing translations of Horace into rhyming English verse. No writing of (optional) Latin verse.

I have just found Pericles' Funeral Oration, the part that contrasts Athens and Sparta. Here's a bit:

There is a difference, too, in our educational systems. The Spartans, from the earliest boyhood, are submitted to the most laborious training in courage; we pass our lives without all these restrictions, and yet are just as ready to face the same dangers as they are… There are certain advantages, I think, in our way of meeting danger voluntarily, with an easy mind, instead of with laborious training, with natural rather than with state-induced courage.

For dangers read exams? Have we changed from a nation of Athenians into a nation of Spartans? And if so, is it a good thing? The Spartans won the Peloponnesian War, yes. But would you choose to live in 5th century Sparta or 5th century Athens?

Those A level results – how did Classics students fare?

The A level results for 2004 have come out, and the usual pictures of delighted students hugging each other have appeared in the papers. Good for them, and let no carping about falling standards spoil their joy.

In fact, there should be fewer disappointed students than ever before, because although the total entry was down on last year, falling by 6.34% to 701,380, the percentage of those not achieving grades A to E was lower too. The overall A-level pass rate has shot up by 4.5 percentage points, from 89.8% last year to 94.3%.

The news about Classical Subjects is even better. The number of entries (5,400) actually rose by 144 (2.7%), and the percentage who didn't get one of the top five grades was a minute 1.3%. Mind you, I haven't seen any breakdown into Latin, Greek and Classical Civilisation yet, so I don't know what the Latin position is; and Classical exams accounted for only 0.8% of exams taken. It's slightly strange when the statistics lump together two of the most demanding subjects with one of the, let's say, less demanding.

Just for interest, I looked at Maths and Modern Languages too. For Maths there were 53,940 entries – 12,307 fewer than for the old A-level last year, a decline of more than 18%, but still 10 times as many as took Classical subjects. The percentage gaining grade A was 3% higher than in Classics. In Modern Languages there was a tiny rise in Spanish entries, but a big drop in both French and German. Grade A rates were 1% higher in Spanish, 1% lower in French and German, than in Classics.

I shall try to construct a table to show the Classics results compared with the overall results. We shall have to wait for more detailed results before we can show potential A level candidates that they have a better chance of a top result in our subject than in others – if indeed it turns out that they do; and if there aren't knee-jerk changes to the system such as have bedevilled education for a couple of decades.

Classical Subjects All Subjects
total entries 5789 766247
A grade 34.1 22.4
B grade 27.7 23.4
C grade 21.2 23.2
D grade 11.8 17.5
E grade 3.9 9.5
F grade 1.3 4.0

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